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Shoddy Battle UU

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Post by Aerodrome Mon Apr 05, 2010 9:11 am

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
zapdosblitz sent out SodenoShirayuki (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
Aerodrome sent out Anna Bligh (lvl 100 Nidoqueen ?).
SodenoShirayuki used Trick.
SodenoShirayuki obtained Leftovers!
Anna Bligh obtained Choice Scarf!
Anna Bligh used Thunderbolt.
SodenoShirayuki lost 39% of its health.
SodenoShirayuki's leftovers restored its health a little!
SodenoShirayuki restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Hisagomaru (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Anna Bligh used Thunderbolt.
It doesn't affect Hisagomaru...
---
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Hisagomaru used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
Suzumushi lost 15% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Hariyama (lvl 100 Hariyama ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama.
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Hisagomaru (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Hariyama used Close Combat.
Hisagomaru lost 45% of its health.
Hariyama's defence was lowered.
Hariyama's special defence was lowered.
The wish came true!
Hisagomaru restored 45% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shania Twain.
Shania Twain lost 12% of its health.
Hisagomaru used Earthquake.
Shania Twain lost 58% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Senbonzakura lost 16% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Anna Bligh (lvl 100 Nidoqueen ?).
Pointed stones dug into Anna Bligh.
Anna Bligh lost 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Leaf Storm.
Anna Bligh lost 48% of its health.
Senbonzakura's special attack was harshly lowered.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Anna Bligh used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Senbonzakura used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Anna Bligh lost 38% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 4% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Pauline Hanson (lvl 100 Meganium ?).
Pointed stones dug into Pauline Hanson.
Pauline Hanson lost 12% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Earthquake.
It's not very effective...
A critical hit!
Pauline Hanson lost 15% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Kazeshini (lvl 100 Spiritomb ?).
Kazeshini is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Kazeshini.
Kazeshini lost 12% of its health.
Pauline Hanson used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
Kazeshini's leftovers restored its health a little!
Kazeshini restored 6% of its health.
---
Pauline Hanson used Light Screen.
A barrier was formed!
Kazeshini used Will-o-wisp.
Kazeshini's attack missed!
Kazeshini's leftovers restored its health a little!
Kazeshini restored 6% of its health.
---
Pauline Hanson used Toxic.
Pauline Hanson's attack missed!
Kazeshini used Will-o-wisp.
Kazeshini's attack missed!
---
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Pointed stones dug into Senbonzakura.
Senbonzakura lost 12% of its health.
Pauline Hanson used Toxic.
Pauline Hanson's attack missed!
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Hariyama (lvl 100 Hariyama ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama.
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Roar.
Aerodrome switched in Raikou (lvl 100 Raikou).
Raikou is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Raikou.
Raikou lost 12% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Suzumushi.
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
Raikou used Extrasensory.
It doesn't affect Suzumushi...
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Dugtrio (lvl 100 Dugtrio ?).
Pointed stones dug into Dugtrio.
Dugtrio lost 6% of its health.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
---
Dugtrio used Stone Edge.
Dugtrio's attack missed!
Suzumushi used Payback.
Dugtrio lost 43% of its health.
Dugtrio's reflect wore off!
The wish came true!
Suzumushi restored 3% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Pauline Hanson (lvl 100 Meganium ?).
Pointed stones dug into Pauline Hanson.
Pauline Hanson lost 12% of its health.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Pauline Hanson's light screen wore off!
---
Pauline Hanson used Toxic.
Suzumushi was badly poisoned!
Pauline Hanson was poisoned!
Suzumushi used Payback.
Pauline Hanson lost 25% of its health.
The wish came true!
Pauline Hanson is hurt by poison!
Pauline Hanson lost 12% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 6% of its health.
---
Pauline Hanson used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
Suzumushi used Curse.
Suzumushi's speed was lowered.
Suzumushi's attack was raised.
Suzumushi's defence was raised.
Pauline Hanson is hurt by poison!
Pauline Hanson lost 12% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
---
Pauline Hanson used Light Screen.
A barrier was formed!
Suzumushi used Payback.
Pauline Hanson lost 11% of its health.
Aerodrome's Pauline Hanson fainted.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 18% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Hariyama (lvl 100 Hariyama ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama.
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
zapdosblitz switched in Kazeshini (lvl 100 Spiritomb ?).
Kazeshini is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Kazeshini.
Kazeshini lost 12% of its health.
Hariyama used Whirlwind.
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Pointed stones dug into Senbonzakura.
Senbonzakura lost 12% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
Senbonzakura used Roar.
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shania Twain.
Shania Twain lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Recover.
Shania Twain restored 50% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Leaf Storm.
It's super effective!
Shania Twain lost 34% of its health.
Senbonzakura's special attack was harshly lowered.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 1% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz: hmm
zapdosblitz: specially defensive milo?
Aerodrome: This is a long battle.
Aerodrome: Umm.
zapdosblitz: cuz standard milo will hit around 60
Aerodrome: I forgot.
Aerodrome: I have Light Screen though.
zapdosblitz: oh
zapdosblitz: that's explain
zapdosblitz switched in Hyourinmaru (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hyourinmaru.
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain used Recover.
Shania Twain restored 43% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome: That's probably why.
zapdosblitz switched in Hisagomaru (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hisagomaru.
Hisagomaru lost 6% of its health.
Aerodrome switched in Hariyama (lvl 100 Hariyama ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama.
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
Hisagomaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hisagomaru restored 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
Hisagomaru used Rapid Spin.
Hisagomaru blew away the pointed stones!
Hariyama lost 3% of its health.
Hariyama used Toxic.
Hisagomaru was badly poisoned!
Hariyama's reflect wore off!
Hisagomaru is hurt by poison!
Hisagomaru lost 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Hariyama used Protect.
Hariyama protected itself!
Hariyama's light screen wore off!
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 3% of its health.
---
Senbonzakura used Roar.
Aerodrome switched in Anna Bligh (lvl 100 Nidoqueen ?).
Pointed stones dug into Anna Bligh.
Anna Bligh lost 6% of its health.
---
Anna Bligh used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around the foe's team!
Senbonzakura used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Anna Bligh lost 2% of its health.
Aerodrome's Anna Bligh fainted.
---
Aerodrome switched in Raikou (lvl 100 Raikou).
Raikou is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Raikou.
Raikou lost 12% of its health.
Raikou used Extrasensory.
It's super effective!
Senbonzakura lost 72% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Raikou lost 55% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Suzumushi.
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
Raikou used Extrasensory.
It doesn't affect Suzumushi...
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shania Twain.
Shania Twain lost 12% of its health.
Suzumushi used Payback.
Shania Twain lost 35% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Recover.
Shania Twain restored 41% of its health.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 18% of its health.
---
Suzumushi used Protect.
Suzumushi protected itself!
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
Suzumushi protected itself!
The wish came true!
Suzumushi restored 50% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 5% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 24% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in SodenoShirayuki (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
Pointed stones dug into SodenoShirayuki.
SodenoShirayuki lost 25% of its health.
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
SodenoShirayuki lost 22% of its health.
SodenoShirayuki's leftovers restored its health a little!
SodenoShirayuki restored 6% of its health.
---
SodenoShirayuki used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Shania Twain used Recover.
SodenoShirayuki's leftovers restored its health a little!
SodenoShirayuki restored 6% of its health.
---
SodenoShirayuki used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Shania Twain used Surf.
SodenoShirayuki lost 32% of its health.
zapdosblitz's SodenoShirayuki fainted.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Kazeshini (lvl 100 Spiritomb ?).
Kazeshini is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Kazeshini.
Kazeshini lost 12% of its health.
plasmastar has entered the room.
Shania Twain used Surf.
A critical hit!
Kazeshini lost 75% of its health.
zapdosblitz's Kazeshini fainted.
---
Aerodrome: Oh dear.
zapdosblitz: ....
zapdosblitz switched in Hyourinmaru (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hyourinmaru.
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
zapdosblitz: fun fact
zapdosblitz: oh dear will not change anything
Aerodrome: Mmm?
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 9% of its health.
Hyourinmaru was frozen solid!
Hyourinmaru was defrosted!
Hyourinmaru used Recover.
Hyourinmaru restored 28% of its health.
---
Aerodrome: Quite true.
zapdosblitz: oh and another fun fact
Aerodrome: You aren't very lucky today.
zapdosblitz: my milo will pp stall your milo
zapdosblitz: yep aerodrome you right
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 14% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Shania Twain lost 13% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz: my +6 umbreon is critted by top close combat today
Aerodrome: Aww.
Aerodrome: That's no fun.
zapdosblitz: and I got Leaf Storm miss on 1-1 condition
zapdosblitz: and lose
zapdosblitz: against rhyperior
Aerodrome: lol
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Shania Twain lost 11% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 8% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
plasmastar has left the room.
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 9% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
A critical hit!
Hyourinmaru lost 18% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Shania Twain lost 8% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome: Ah.
Aerodrome: Haze huh?
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 9% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Shania Twain lost 8% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 9% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Recover.
Hyourinmaru restored 44% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 3% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 15% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 13% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 13% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Surf.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 13% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Hariyama (lvl 100 Hariyama ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama.
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
Hariyama was hurt by Spikes!
Hariyama lost 19% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Haze.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
Hyourinmaru used Recover.
Hyourinmaru restored 23% of its health.
Hariyama used Toxic.
Hyourinmaru was badly poisoned!
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Pointed stones dug into Senbonzakura.
Senbonzakura lost 12% of its health.
Hariyama used Whirlwind.
zapdosblitz switched in Hyourinmaru (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hyourinmaru.
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
Hariyama used Protect.
Hariyama protected itself!
Hyourinmaru used Surf.
Hariyama protected itself!
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Suzumushi.
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
Hariyama used Whirlwind.
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Pointed stones dug into Senbonzakura.
Senbonzakura lost 12% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 0% of its health.
---
Senbonzakura used Synthesis.
Senbonzakura restored 50% of its health.
Hariyama used Whirlwind.
zapdosblitz switched in Hyourinmaru (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hyourinmaru.
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 6% of its health.
---
Hariyama used Protect.
Hariyama protected itself!
Hyourinmaru used Recover.
Hyourinmaru restored 37% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Suzumushi.
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
Hariyama used Protect.
But it failed!
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 6% of its health.
---
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Hariyama used Whirlwind.
zapdosblitz switched in Hyourinmaru (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hyourinmaru.
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 6% of its health.
---
Hariyama used Protect.
Hariyama protected itself!
Hyourinmaru used Surf.
Hariyama protected itself!
The wish came true!
Hyourinmaru restored 25% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Suzumushi.
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shania Twain.
Shania Twain lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain was hurt by Spikes!
Shania Twain lost 19% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Recover.
Shania Twain restored 25% of its health.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
---
Suzumushi used Protect.
Suzumushi protected itself!
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
Suzumushi protected itself!
The wish came true!
Suzumushi restored 50% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 18% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
Suzumushi lost 15% of its health.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 24% of its health.
---
Suzumushi used Protect.
Suzumushi protected itself!
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
Suzumushi protected itself!
The wish came true!
Suzumushi restored 50% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 30% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Hyourinmaru (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hyourinmaru.
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
Hyourinmaru lost 9% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 6% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
A critical hit!
Hyourinmaru lost 19% of its health.
Hyourinmaru used Recover.
Hyourinmaru restored 50% of its health.
Hyourinmaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hyourinmaru restored 4% of its health.
Hyourinmaru is hurt by poison!
Hyourinmaru lost 12% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Suzumushi (lvl 100 Umbreon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Suzumushi.
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain used Haze.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Haze.
Suzumushi used Wish.
Suzumushi made a wish!
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 12% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Hariyama (lvl 100 Hariyama ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama.
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
Hariyama was hurt by Spikes!
Hariyama lost 19% of its health.
Suzumushi used Protect.
Suzumushi protected itself!
The wish came true!
Suzumushi restored 50% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Suzumushi restored 6% of its health.
Suzumushi is hurt by poison!
Suzumushi lost 18% of its health.
---
Hariyama used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
Suzumushi lost 81% of its health.
zapdosblitz's Suzumushi fainted.
Hariyama's defence was lowered.
Hariyama's special defence was lowered.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Senbonzakura (lvl 100 Venusaur ?).
Pointed stones dug into Senbonzakura.
Senbonzakura lost 12% of its health.
Hariyama used Protect.
Hariyama protected itself!
Senbonzakura used Roar.
Hariyama protected itself!
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
---
Senbonzakura used Roar.
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shania Twain.
Shania Twain lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain was hurt by Spikes!
Shania Twain lost 19% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
Senbonzakura lost 40% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Synthesis.
Senbonzakura restored 50% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Shania Twain used Ice Beam.
It's super effective!
Senbonzakura lost 41% of its health.
Senbonzakura used Roar.
Aerodrome switched in Raikou (lvl 100 Raikou).
Raikou is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Raikou.
Raikou lost 12% of its health.
Raikou was hurt by Spikes!
Raikou lost 7% of its health.
Aerodrome's Raikou fainted.
Senbonzakura's leftovers restored its health a little!
Senbonzakura restored 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Dugtrio (lvl 100 Dugtrio ?).
Pointed stones dug into Dugtrio.
Dugtrio lost 6% of its health.
Dugtrio was hurt by Spikes!
Dugtrio lost 18% of its health.
Dugtrio used Earthquake.
Senbonzakura lost 46% of its health.
zapdosblitz's Senbonzakura fainted.
---
zapdosblitz switched in Hisagomaru (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Pointed stones dug into Hisagomaru.
Hisagomaru lost 6% of its health.
Dugtrio used Earthquake.
Hisagomaru lost 40% of its health.
Hisagomaru used Earthquake.
Dugtrio lost 26% of its health.
Aerodrome's Dugtrio fainted.
Hisagomaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hisagomaru restored 6% of its health.
Hisagomaru is hurt by poison!
Hisagomaru lost 6% of its health.
---
Aerodrome switched in Shania Twain (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Pointed stones dug into Shania Twain.
Shania Twain lost 12% of its health.
Shania Twain was hurt by Spikes!
Shania Twain lost 19% of its health.
Shania Twain used Recover.
Shania Twain restored 50% of its health.
Hisagomaru used Earthquake.
Shania Twain lost 52% of its health.
Shania Twain's leftovers restored its health a little!
Shania Twain restored 6% of its health.
Hisagomaru's leftovers restored its health a little!
Hisagomaru restored 6% of its health.
Hisagomaru is hurt by poison!
Hisagomaru lost 12% of its health.
---
zapdosblitz: gg
zapdosblitz: crit Razz
Aerodrome: To who?
Aerodrome: Oh.
zapdosblitz has left the room.
Aerodrome wins!


Comments plz.
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Post by Schala Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:57 pm

It was interesting, though certainly a stall battle. However it's also a bit confusing at times.

Some things that make it clearer to the reader what exactly is going on include: color coding (your name and Pokemon's actions in one color, your opponents in another), a list of all of your and your opponent's Pokemon either at the start or end of the log, and a tally of the score (ex: if you faint one of the opponents Pokemon first, at the end of the "turn" put "6-5" to make it clearer).

Another thing that can make logs really interesting is adding a running commentary on the battle after every turn (it can be as simple as "----- fainted, but managed to get stealth rock up successfully before that, so now I can switch ---- in and start my attacking" or something). This helps people see what you were thinking during the match, and you can point out where you made bad mistakes, got lucky, or had a good prediction.

Also, I've seen people put "pros and cons" at the end before, pointing out Pokemon that really worked and those that flopped, as well as decisions that did the same.

I've also seen people go all out and put sprites of the Pokemon, their health left, and use their own styles to make some really pretty logs, but that's a huge amount of work.

I'm not saying that you have to implement all (or any) of these (especially the more time consuming ones), but they usually make things more interesting for readers, which makes it more likely that they will spend the time to read and comment.

Overall: it's a decent first log, but some small tweaks could make future logs better.
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Post by Aerodrome Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:39 am

You should make that post the rules for this forum. ^_____^

Yeah, this is my first log. I'mma fix it up.
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Post by Schala Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:00 pm

I was actually considering putting up some guidelines so that I could link back to that instead of type it up every time someone new posts a log. I'll try to get that done and up by the end of this week.

Still, it's a good (if long) first long. Just needs a little color.
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